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Dec 17, 2003 | 01:00 PM

#11

Orion_95

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Quote:

Originally posted by JordyO:
<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Tinted:
8Track Im sorry but your story didnt make any sense grammatically. maybe you should use commans, periods and avoid run on sentances.
What is the story saying?

Because we all know the net is where you need perfect grammar and punctuation. [img]graemlins/bs.gif[/img]

Get off his back. The rest of us understood what he said.

btw.. you should have capitalized the M in "maybe" and it's "comma" not "comman" .. I'm sure there are a few other mistakes in there too, but I'm not a grammar ****. [/QUOTE]There should be an apostrophe in "I'm". Also, if we want to be picky, "What is the story saying" is not proper, because storys can't talk. [img]graemlins/thumb.gif[/img]

Does anybody need help proof-reading? [img]tongue.gif[/img]

*edit* There should also be a comma after "8Track"

[ December 17, 2003, 02:03 PM: Message edited by: Orion_95 ]

Dec 18, 2003 | 06:31 AM

#12

JordyO

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Quote:

Originally posted by Orion_95:
<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by JordyO:
<blockquote>quote:<hr />Originally posted by Tinted:
8Track Im sorry but your story didnt make any sense grammatically. maybe you should use commans, periods and avoid run on sentances.
What is the story saying?

Because we all know the net is where you need perfect grammar and punctuation. [img]graemlins/bs.gif[/img]

Get off his back. The rest of us understood what he said.

btw.. you should have capitalized the M in "maybe" and it's "comma" not "comman" .. I'm sure there are a few other mistakes in there too, but I'm not a grammar ****. [/QUOTE]There should be an apostrophe in "I'm". Also, if we want to be picky, "What is the story saying" is not proper, because storys can't talk. [img]graemlins/thumb.gif[/img]

Does anybody need help proof-reading? [img]tongue.gif[/img]

*edit* There should also be a comma after "8Track" [/QUOTE]Exactly [img]graemlins/thumb.gif[/img]

(btw.. I never WROTE "what the story is saying" I believe what I put was "What HE is saying" and for all you know he was speaking out loud as he was typing!) [img]graemlins/deal4u.gif[/img]

Dec 18, 2003 | 10:38 PM

#13

Blinddemonz

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Quote:

Originally posted by Tinted:
8Track Im sorry but your story didnt make any sense grammatically. maybe you should use commans, periods and avoid run on sentances.
What is the story saying?

You sound like my communications teacher from last semester, an yrelation!?!? [img]tongue.gif[/img] lol

Dec 20, 2003 | 11:56 PM

#14

Thunderous Contender

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Weird.. usually people in nice cars get jacked over. Here, my buddy in a bright red 97 eclipse turbo done up real nice got pulled over for doing 83... "83" in a 80... brutal.

Dec 21, 2003 | 09:47 PM

#15

SwantonRX-7

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If I was a cop and I saw a nice looking carand I pulled them over. I would be thinking they would want to sue my *** for wasting there time with the ticket (yeah I know it's dumb thinking)

Dec 22, 2003 | 06:12 PM

#16

Mr. Marco

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Cops do give preferential treatment to those driving fancy cars. whenever i would borrow my friend's benz to go on a date, i could be at 30 over the limit and never get booked... cops would just look the other way. now with the Z, i get enough respect! i had a cop put down his radar gun and nod in respect one day on my drive to work... can't do that on a hyped up fart can...